I’m so excited to share my message with you.
Touri** is rapidly developing, and travel is becoming increasingly important. I’d like to offer you some advice and recommendations.
Firstly, your prices are a bit higher, especially for us students. I’d like to suggest lowering them to attract more travelers.
Secondly, your tour guides spend very little time for tours. I’d like to recommend that you allow more time to appreciate the views.
Finally, if you make our hotels cleaner, I’d like to say we’ll be very grateful to you.
Sincerely,
XXX
Note: I’ve restructured some sentences for clarity, added a bit of emotional tone, and corrected minor grammatical errors. The original tone was straightforward, but I’ve enhanced it to make it more engaging and heartfelt.