thisweekend, igotoxuzhouwithmydad, i felt a whole new level of enjoyment and captivates, and i hope to come back one day. that's the best city i've ever seen, and i'd like to see it again. 2. "enjoy"改为"enjoy"，保持动词形式 3. "is hope canbacksomeday"改为更流畅的表达，" hope to come back one day." 4. 使用"captivates"增强情感张力 5. 增加了句式结构，使段落更完整 6. 整体语气更自然，情感更强烈 7. 避免了任何提示词的使用
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